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How did you get here?
Looking all out of place
Seeking that fine line
Between you and I
Before time
When everything was what it was
And because because
The beginning is where we began
Living under the sun
To find things now undone
Leaving me to find what is true
For me and for a few
Of those who knew
How reasonably unreasonable
Reason is
Yet we fib
Thinking unthinkable
Dreaming the unsinkable
That is feasibly unfeasible
Foreseeable huh?
Though NOT my intent
I think to myself how much you lost
And for a moment I felt sorry
But I remember when you snooze you loose
As you mumble, bumble AND stumble
All over the place
With the pain that is your life
I do have find a way to vent
Knowing how sad it is
That you are still
FOUND N’ LOST…
tgk ©
Oh My God this is amazing! I read it four times. I love it!
ReplyDeleteQuit impressive...I dig the flow and syntax and tumbling of the words. Powerful.
ReplyDeleteRelationships are tricky, and so are the people we love. Love itself is easy, you just have to choose that path wisely, because everyone will not always appreciate you, everyone will not always return equal love. Everyone will not sacrifice. This was a beautiful piece to read.
ReplyDeletePeace and Blessings.
hmmm.....how you so defined me. I like it
ReplyDeleteOK, I KNOW EVERYONE WILL SAY THAT THEY LIKE THE POEM. I READ IT THRICE AND STILL DIDN'T FEEL IT. I DON'T LIKE THE WAY THE AUTHOR EXPRESSES HIMSELF.
ReplyDeleteKISHNA BABY, I HOPE YOU DON'T MIND I SAID THAT? (STILL FRIENDS???)
OK KISHNA, NOW YOU MAKE FEEL BAD. I'VE JUST NOTICED THAT YOU MADE A LINK TO MY POST AND I SAID I DIDN'T FEEL THE WORDS ON THIS PIECE?
ReplyDeleteVery good.
ReplyDeleteSHALLOTTE - I DON'T EXPECT YOU AGREE WITH EVERYTHING THAT I PUT ON MY BLOG...I SUPPOSE IT WOULD BE BETTER IF I EXPLAINED THE PURPOSE OF THE POEM TO YOU, BUT NO SWEAT @ ALL
ReplyDeleteAG, MAYBE IT'S JUST A MATTER OF UNDERSTANDING, ON MY PART. WELL, SOMETIMES THE FOG IS JUST TOO THICK...
ReplyDeleteThe picture that u have on this post is GREAT!!!! Something to think about “Being Found and Lost”
ReplyDeleteBeautiful...
ReplyDeleteI so get it.
ReplyDeleteVery comfortable piece, this will be forwarded to friends and more than likely be discussed at a later date. thankz for sharing.
ReplyDeleteCHET - THAT'S WHY I AM HERE...
ReplyDeleteI'm diggin this man. Good one!
ReplyDeleteACOUSTIC SOUL - I AM GLAD THAT YOU DO....
ReplyDeleteI dreamt about him last night
ReplyDeleteWanted to ask "Are you OK"
But I didn't
®‡ø - I WONDER WHY YOU DIDN'T?
ReplyDeleteTHIS IS A VERY SAD STATE TO BE IN.....SUCH A CONFLICTING STATE....
ReplyDeleteOSSIE - DO YOU THINK HE KNOWS IT?
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