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Monday, 29 December 2008

THE FIRST TIME...


 

Spinning empty bottles
I come undone.
For a moment
Thinking of things
That goes unsaid
I haven't heard your voice,
But I know when you speak.
I do not follow your words,
But I know what you say.
I cannot know your immense joy,
But I feel the sting of your venom!

 
You leave me in a world
Filled with curiosity;
And I sometimes I get away from me.
Thinking we were mirrors of each other
I lay bare,
Hoping you possess some traits of me;
Rather than the unconscious and unresolved issues you see.
So I bleed willingly as you wound my soul
Knowing that you don’t really care about me.
If only you were the change I seek to be in this world,
As I foolishly LOVE that which I hate…

 
Feeling drawn to reflect
Your inner self back at you,
The parts that don’t show
True beauty, divinity, sweetness, or the light.
It was like you had the soul of another…
And the pieces of you that remain,
Are the ties that bind.
The ones that try to clutter my mind
Of the thoughtless thoughts
That can ONLY be me seeing you,
For THE FIRST TIME all over again…

14 comments:

  1. The first time consisted of the Truth or Dare game and I didnt want to do it. When it finally entered me it hurt. Yeah and I was trying to like it, but the pain got my intense...then I felt sore afterwards...and I was thinking to myself "so this is what it feels like" but he got shot RIP. This is what you meant by first time right...LMFAO!! IF NOT OOPS.

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  2. This photo is like a thousand words.....!!!:)

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  3. Captured by the pic,,defines alot.Poetic and proffesional.1st time,,uuummm

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  4. ummm, the first time what....like our first time. Or Noel's first time with (wink)......stay sweet boi!

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  5. ooooooooooooooooh , I know...Our secret....hahahaha

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  6. I FEEL LIKE I SHOULD SAY AMEN BECAUSE THIS POEM EXPRESSES WHAT I'VE BEEN SAYING AND FEELING FOR A LONG TIME.SOMETIMES WE FIGURE THAT WE KNOW PEOPLE AROUND US BUT MORE OFTEN THAN NOT WE DON'T. PEOPLE DO AN EXCELLENT JOB OF HIDING THEIR TRUE SELVES. THEIR TRUE COLORS MAY COME OUT DURING CERTAIN SITUATIONS (FORTUNATELY SOONER RATHER THAN LAT ER) AND WE STRUGGLE TO RECOGNIZE THE PERSON BEFORE US.
    DON'T BE FAKE MY PEOPLE!!!!!!! BE YOUR TRUE, AUTHENTIC SELF.LET YOUR TRUE COLORS SHINE THROUGH........

    AMEN TO THIS POST!!!! A RESOUNDING AMEN!!!!!!!!

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  7. Ossie you need to get a bloggers account....I want to see more of you....LMAO

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  8. Oyin I think I make a better commentator than blogger... I would leave blogging up to people like you and my babes.....

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  9. U know what...gayte im a lil mad u put that poem under the pic after i posted my SEX LIFE then didnt hit me back to let me know u did it! Smh. (Shaking my head.)

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  10. JAMAR HERROD - I AM SORRY NEXT TIME I WILL GIVE YOU A HEADS UP (^_^)

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  11. 4 Ossie- O ok, just thought I could see your inner you...lol!! Yea, you boo, doing the damn thing...*WINK

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  12. The photo is haunting

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